So. There are a handful of proofreading errors: "Julien" becomes "Fabien" at one point; I got the message about Mon emptying water into a bowl of noodles three times.
I'm pointing out these nitpicks because I hate the idea that there's even the tiniest thing wrong with the story, because it's good. Like, really good. Kept-me-turning-virtual-pages good. Well-drawn characters (heck, I was starting to grow fond of the DJ by the end), very real setting, compelling story. If this is your first solo game, I am dying to read the next one. (Well, I mean, not like Lacey-dying. But still.)
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Really loved this. A fun exploration of the first night of being a vampire.
Thank you! :-)
When I try to download this game nothing comes up, is there something I'm missing?
There's nothing to download - it plays in browser.
So. There are a handful of proofreading errors: "Julien" becomes "Fabien" at one point; I got the message about Mon emptying water into a bowl of noodles three times.
I'm pointing out these nitpicks because I hate the idea that there's even the tiniest thing wrong with the story, because it's good. Like, really good. Kept-me-turning-virtual-pages good. Well-drawn characters (heck, I was starting to grow fond of the DJ by the end), very real setting, compelling story. If this is your first solo game, I am dying to read the next one. (Well, I mean, not like Lacey-dying. But still.)
Hah 😊 Thank you!
I'll look at fixing those and put up a new version tomorrow!
The noodles bug is interesting - that was found and fixed during testing! Must have somehow gotten un-fixed...
Fixed! Thank you.